Wednesday, August 29, 2007

T shirt Idea



I been playing around with some tshirt I idea to maybe try to send off to carters this is one what do you think.

5 comments:

Jeremy Schramm said...

Hey Kate, looking very nice! The only thing that really bothers me, is the lack of feet for the rabbit. Other than that, very pretty-pretty princess-esque!

CRAiG-o said...

WOAH MAN!!! LIke one of the most awesome ideas ever just came to me!!!! you should "tattoo that design somehow onto the rabbit, that would be SOOO cool. Dude I would TOTALLY wear a tatooed rabbit t-shirt! even if it was pink

Jason Williams said...
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Jason Williams said...

I didn't even catch the foot thing, but now that jeremy pointed it out... >_<

I think this is some really great work Katie, I quite a few suggestions but they're pretty nitpicky so feel free to ignore.

1) It feels like the rabbbit's eyes and ears should be set back more on its head. I dunno, I would just say play with it a bit, I could be way off.

2) the leaves of the plant have some good play with thick and thin, but it could be even more! They seem pretty thick generally speaking so you could thin the thinner parts down some and get more contrast in thickness and also have it feel more varied in one fell swoop.
Also, you might want to consider possibly having the leaves form more dramatic spirals. That's a matter of personal taste though.

3) More variation in flower size! make 2 or three of em a bit bigger. :)

4) The butterfly: the top part of the wings is usually noticeably larger in breadth compared to the lower part of the wings. So scale the lower 1/3 down a bit and the top 2/3's up a bit and you should be good! Maybe segment the body a bit too to separate the head from the thorax and abdomen. Again, personal taste.

Duncan Barton said...

cool, I'd wear it!