Kate lookin good! I've got three things to say though. 1. I feel the text could be bigger, to fill up all that space aswell for the little kiddies reading. 2. the kid in the middle with the shaved head, I would like to see the area where his hair is to be abit of a darker color. 3. the tiled flooring is looking great on the right and bottom but this little sliver on the left side behind the kid bothers me. I think you could possibly just take it out and have the wall continue down.
Looking really good though, cant wait to see the rest!
white 81.7%, black 12.9%, Asian 4.2%, Amerindian and Alaska native 1%, native Hawaiian and other Pacific islander 0.2% (2003 est.)"
needs more whiteys.
All kidding aside, Jeremy's right about the text, for sure. Definitely increase the size of the type, but also play around with font choices; a sans-serif (arial is an example- sans serif means it doesnt have the little tab type shapes on the ends of the lines that the characters are formed from) is much more playful and typically better suited for children's books.
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Kate lookin good! I've got three things to say though.
1. I feel the text could be bigger, to fill up all that space aswell for the little kiddies reading.
2. the kid in the middle with the shaved head, I would like to see the area where his hair is to be abit of a darker color.
3. the tiled flooring is looking great on the right and bottom but this little sliver on the left side behind the kid bothers me. I think you could possibly just take it out and have the wall continue down.
Looking really good though, cant wait to see the rest!
"Ethnic groups:
white 81.7%, black 12.9%, Asian 4.2%, Amerindian and Alaska native 1%, native Hawaiian and other Pacific islander 0.2% (2003 est.)"
needs more whiteys.
All kidding aside, Jeremy's right about the text, for sure. Definitely increase the size of the type, but also play around with font choices; a sans-serif (arial is an example- sans serif means it doesnt have the little tab type shapes on the ends of the lines that the characters are formed from) is much more playful and typically better suited for children's books.
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