Hey katie- I think it's great that you've completed this whole thing. Is the author going to publish it soon? How is she going to do it?
some crit: I think the text handling gets strange in some parts, like how the different paragraphs simply start on the next line. It looks awkward, especially because they are so short- perhaps bigger gaps between them? Also the shot of the dad holding the baby in his palm looks like a break of style from the rest of the book because of the scale of the kid. Maybe he should have been an infant if he was infant sized.... anyway enough from me, keep going!
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Hey katie- I think it's great that you've completed this whole thing. Is the author going to publish it soon? How is she going to do it?
some crit: I think the text handling gets strange in some parts, like how the different paragraphs simply start on the next line. It looks awkward, especially because they are so short- perhaps bigger gaps between them? Also the shot of the dad holding the baby in his palm looks like a break of style from the rest of the book because of the scale of the kid. Maybe he should have been an infant if he was infant sized.... anyway enough from me, keep going!
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