Hooray for taking forever on commenting! I recall talking with you on AIM right after you posted this, but I have more to say now!
Page 1 looks great overall, you've been good at rendering for as long as i can recall. The only thing that bugs me is the outline around the guy in the bottom left; it's a bit heavy and draws too much attention to itself.
Page 2: a hand towel? hehe, it works I guess. You really packed the right side with drawings, I can't ever bring myself to do so, and I often end up with only one drawing on a page. :( My hat is off to you.
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Hooray for taking forever on commenting! I recall talking with you on AIM right after you posted this, but I have more to say now!
Page 1 looks great overall, you've been good at rendering for as long as i can recall. The only thing that bugs me is the outline around the guy in the bottom left; it's a bit heavy and draws too much attention to itself.
Page 2: a hand towel? hehe, it works I guess. You really packed the right side with drawings, I can't ever bring myself to do so, and I often end up with only one drawing on a page. :( My hat is off to you.
Page 3: That cowboy is awesome. like, awesome.
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