Wednesday, February 14, 2007

pages






Well I know I haven't posted in a while But I been busy. Jason I told you I post something sometime this week. Well I couldn't reamember which pages i have already posted and which ones I posted but fixed up some so I just reposted everything. Expect for one page because it just wont down load which I can't figure out why yet so you have all the page expect for one because that you didn't post.

1 comment:

Jason Williams said...

For the most part I like what you've shown us of the book (hell, looks like all of it ;P), but the front cover needs a lot of help. The image is fine, I have no qualms with it. But you need to find some great examples of how:

1) typography is handled on children's books (usually custom made, it seems)
2)graphic elements that enhance but don't distract from the main image are handled (you NEED some kind of framing around the illustration of those hands)
3) how to maximize usage of the space on the cover without making everything feel crowded.

Good luck to ya, heheh. ;)